Poetry Analysis of Limbo, Blessing and Half Caste

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Poetry Analysis of Limbo, Blessing and Half Caste

I have chosen four different poems of which come from varying cultural

backgrounds and have a moral.

I will now explain how the writers present their ideas and give the

readers an insight into different cultures.

Limbo is a poem, which shows us the feelings of slaves on slave ships

written by Edward Kamau. This poem tells the story of slavery in a

rhyming, rhythmic dance. It is ambitious and complex. There are two

narratives running in parallel, which are, the actions of the dance,

andthe history of the people, which is being enacted.

The poem shows a lot of repetition of phrases such as 'Limbo Limbo

like me, Limbo Limbo like me'. This expresses that the phrase is

dominant enough to be said twice.

The poem has a very strong beat, suggesting the dance describes: where

the word limbo appears as a complete line, it should be spoken slowly,

the first syllable extended and both syllables stressed: Lim-bo.

The writer shows fluent use of rhythm even by using varied length of

lines, this makes the reader go along with the movement of both the

poem and the storyline in general, it also makes it more involving to

the reader.

Limbo is a poem of positions as the writer uses such language to break

down the moment in the poem, one example of this is when he uses the

words 'down down down'. Speaking opposite to this phrase the writer

then re-enforces the poem by using the words 'up up up' which elevates

the moment of the poem.

The poem interests the reader as the chorus is written in italics.

While the italics give the refrain (chorus) which reminds us of the

dance, the re...

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...on" (people

gathering for worship).

The water is a source of other metaphors - fortune is seen as a "rush"

(like water rushing out of the burst pipe), and the sound of the flow

is matched by that of the people who seek it - their tongues are a

"roar", like the gushing water. Most tellingly of all, water is

likened to "silver" which "crashes to the ground".

The poem is written in unrhymed lines, mostly brief, some of which run

on, while others are end-stopped, creating an effect of natural

speech. The poet writes lists for the people ("man woman/child") and

the vessels they bring ("...with pots/brass, copper,

aluminium,/plastic buckets"). The poem appeals to the reader's senses,

with references to the dripping noise of water (as if the hearer is

waiting for there to be enough to drink) and the flashing sunlight.

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