Personal Narrative

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Quiet as a mouse, the man opens Kristin’s bedroom door slightly-- just enough to where a crack of light passing. Anxiously, she jumps out of her sheets and sees her dad standing there. “I tried to call you, so you could get packed for the trip to Indiana.” While Kristin sits on her bed thinking about how tired she is, the rest of the family rapidly packs up their bags like they only had one minute until the house would explode. Kristin’s mom has always been there for her, but this time in her life, she would have to become an adult. Ka! BACKK! The a door slams loudly. “MOM! The girls at my school are very mean and they are bullying me,” Kristin said. “Oh honey, what could have happened at your new school?” Her mother said. “These group of …show more content…

At that moment when her mother said those inspirational words, Kristin’s self-esteem went up and she felt better about who she was. She rose with happiness as she thinks about how superior she thinks she is. “I love you mom, you always know how to show me that I’m better than I think i am.”Kristin said. “Now Kristin, don’t go walking around school with the “big head,okay." “Yes mom”. They …show more content…

Larry, Kristin"s boyfriend,had been dating for a while and they had been working on getting married. But before Kristin would even think about getting married, she’d have to deal with college first. One day Kristin stopped by to visit her mom,dad,and brother. “Hey guys i came to visit you guys.” Kristin said. Kristin saw that there was nobody in the living room. “ Hi guys?” “ Hello?” She said again. Kristin still didn’t hear anyone. This kind of scared her because her family were supposed to be at the house because they knew she would be coming over. Kristin finally heard a noise. It sounded like crying. She ran to the backyard to come to find out that…“NO!” Kristin cried. The harsh feeling of her heart breaking made her cry. The siren of the ambulance was very loud. Kristin’s mother had died. Kristin’s mother wasn’t breathing. Kristin and her family were gathered around her mom crying. Finally they were at the hospital taking to the doctors. One of them said, I’m very sorry but she has passed due to a heart

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