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Women’s rights were a huge topic in the 1920s and 30s. Many women spoke out against sexism in hopes to be heard and possibly change government policy against women for the better. Among these many women is Virginia Woolf. Her essay, “Shakespeare’s Sister,” details a traumatic situation in which a fictional character, Judith, experiences prejudice when she tries to live out her dreams. Woolf creates her essay using the three tools of persuasive writing, ethos, logos, and pathos. In her essay, “Shakespeare’s Sister,” Virginia Woolf defends and Supports her argument with the use of outlandish word choice, hypothetical situations, and a narrative story with a fictional character.
Virginia Woolf backs up her claim by using outlandish word choice to describe the harsh reality of the horrible life of a woman in Shakespeare’s time. Woolf writes of an instance when Judith is reading some books and papers and her parents use some uncommon word choice. The essay says, “But then her parents came in and told her to mend the stockings or mind the stew and not moon about with books and papers” (566). When Woolf writes this sentence she uses the word moon. She uses this word because it is easily definable, but it is still sophisticated enough to establish draw people in. She also tells of how Judith was treated when she tried to join the theater. Woolf writes, “Men laughed in her face. The manager - a fat, loose-lipped man – guffawed” (566). Not only did men find it funny that she would make such an attempt, but were so overwhelmed with the notion that they guffawed. Since “guffaw” is not a word people are used to hearing, it sparks their interest while still being understandable because of the context. Virginia Woolf’s use of outlandish and sop...

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...Pinpointing the situation to a specific individual, while hypothetical, makes the reader feel as if the situation is personal, thus establishing Woolf’s pathos.
Virginia Woolf’s essay, “Shakespeare’s Sister,” tells a heart-pulling story of a woman named Judith living in Shakespeare’s time. Her story demonstrates a very effective use of ethos, logos, and pathos. From telling how Judith was treated and undervalued, to telling of her tragic death, Woolf substantiates her argument more than enough to buy into the idea that women should be treated as equals to men. The essay is a prime example of a top-level persuasive piece of writing.

Works Cited

Woolf, Virginia. “Shakespeare’s Sister.” Literature and Society: An Introduction to Fiction, Poetry, Drama, Nonfiction. Eds. Pamela J. Annas and Robert C. Rosen. 4th ed. Upper Saddle River, NJ: Pearson, 2007. 565-67. Print.

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