Kidney Failure Thesis Statement

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I choose this topic because my grandmother had died of kidney failure. Dialysis kept her alive for two weeks before she died. She had to go under dialysis but due to her weight, her heart problems and having diabetes, her body could not withstand the process and she died. Constructing a thesis statement and a topic sentence was difficult for me. I noticed I need more practice on constructing a thesis statement and the topic sentence. My evidence was kind of hard to find, I had to read a lot of article to get the right information to support my paper. Overall, writing the paper was a little bit difficult but learn how to construct a thesis and topic sentence. I used the Michigan state university library search tool on the website to find articles

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