Isolation In W. D. Valgardson's First Flight

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The title of the short story, “First Flight” by W. D. Valgardson, may indicate that someone is attempting to escape an undesirable situation. However, this flight attempt may not go as planned and actually worsen the situation that this individual is facing. Something effective in “First Flight” is the personification used to emphasize the misery of Gregory’s isolation. When Gregory seeks company at a café, its emptiness “[dampens] the buoyancy” (482) of his mood and “[dulls] the sharp edge” (482) of his happiness, astutely depicting how forlorn Gregory feels. Additionally, the torment of isolation is evident in that winter “[freezes] all spontaneity and [seals] off all relationships” (483). Something ineffective in “First Flight” is the awkward phrasing which decreases the clarity of the text. After Gregory arrives at a railway station and opens the door, seeking warmth, the “cold air [boils] into the room, wreathing him in mist, making him look faded, a ghost of himself” (484). Although a sequence of commas can be effective through its realistic depiction of human thought (stream of consciousness), in this case, it is ineffective as it does not portray the events in a more realistic manner, but instead merely causes confusion. …show more content…

D. Valgardson, as they commit rash acts following their emotional struggle with the harsh isolation surrounding them. After “[lunging] for freedom” (487) when teased by a corporal, Gregory “[keeps] his sorrow to himself” (487) as he feels “hollow” (483) from the loneliness that prevents him from gaining comfort from others and eventually leads him to commit suicide. Likewise, after Ellen’s husband, Mathew, forbids her from enjoying Kloski’s company, Ellen experiences isolation, which eventually drives Ellen to not only disobey Mathew’s strict orders but even watch him die instead of saving

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