I Aint No Good Girl Analysis

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Literacy Critique While reading the story, “I Ain’t No Good Girl” by Sharon Flake, I felt like the characters did not really develop the plot as I would have anticipated. The story “I Aint No Good Girl” is primarily about a girl who is madly in love with a guy named Raheem that she is completely blind sighted about the fact that he is abusing, threatening, and gets cheated on. But what aggravates me the most is that even after all that she constantly takes him back. In all honesty, I truly believe that the narrator, with no name, has a huge weakness; and that weakness is that since she is discouraged by her mom, which caused her to be completely blind sighted about Raheem which made her so willingly to take him back even though she realized she was being abused and cheated on. “You aint no beauty prize”-Narrators mom. And: “He hooks his thumb through my gold hooped earring and pulls down hard……….But he don’t get far-I don’t let him. I apologized.” This shows that Raheem is abusive and that the narrator is very forgiving and blind-sighted. As the end neared, I felt as if the narrator did not really act realistic in the scene because …show more content…

If the narrator were to break up with Raheem, I believe a new conflict would arise because Raheem would probably not graduate due to him always skipping. “I’ll get to his class, I think, and let the teacher know he is sick today.” Overall, the story “I Aint No Good Girl” by Sharon Flake is pretty good, but the development of the plot is still a problem. I’ll give you some advice and read the story and give me your thoughts on it. I am really looking forward to reading the book and finding out her final

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