For My Brothers And Sisters In The Failure Business Summary

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Through the use of point of view, a writer’s work has the ability to change immensely. In Seymour Krim’s personalized essay, “For my Brothers and Sisters in the Failure Business,” his utilization of second person creates a special bond, solidifying a unique relationship between himself and his audience. Fresh and exciting aspects are introduced into his work that include new perspectives and the transformation of his story through the use of subjectivity. The author’s pairing of second person with other features of form is both exciting and brilliant. He shifts away from the norm of first person and chooses an appropriate level of formality for his theme of ambition. Krim uses his second person vocabulary which eliminates status while drawing …show more content…

Krim makes the decision to state that, “we’re-all-fucked-together-so-let’s-make-the-best-of- it” adding in another expression later on the page that reads, “do-it-or-shut-up” (Krim 583). These informal statements transpose the reader to a time where they may have deemed these expressions appropriate in context, creating a sense of connection within this real life expression. For me, I began to think about my day to day vocabulary and where I would use these specific expressions. I soon realized that because Seymour was using words that are highly relatable to form his sentences, he introduced me to a new world within writing, a world that began to connect with mine. The authors colloquial word choice is evident again when he says that, “you may think sometimes everyone lives in the crotch of the pleasure principle” (Krim 578). Seymour’s decision to use the word ‘crotch’ is both bold and highly relatable. He approaches his audience on a more personal level while demonstrating proper use of subjectivity. As the reader, the use of informal writing in this piece made me feel a heightened connection with Seymour Krim. It was almost like this wasn’t a public piece, but more of a private piece, like a letter he had written to me and only

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