Creative Writing: The Bird, The Wind, And The Cage

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The Bird, The Wind, and The Cage

The bird flew effortlessly through the trees, the wind gently guiding her around branches

and thorns, never letting her fall. The wind had always been the bird's friend and she thought it

would forever stay that way, until the day she saw a beautiful shining star burning through the

shadows of the forest. Fascinated by the radiance she moved towards it. Every inch she traveled

forward, the star's brilliance would strengthen. To the bird, this was a spectacle never seen by

another. She longed to be bathed in the golden light, but the wind had another plan in mind that

was not in the bird's favor. As soon as she reached her sought after destination, her wings grew

heavier and heavier. She flew straight into the star and dropped to the bottom.

Looking around, she noticed that it was not in fact a star but a cage. The wind with his

mighty breath blew the door closed, the bird still inside. She tried to cry out for help, but no more

than a crackly squeal came out of her mouth. Spectacular gold, scarlet, and sunset coral once

danced on her back and gleamed in the midday light, but now all that was left was a murky rust

coating her feathers. The bird had never felt sadness this deep. She no longer had a voice. Her

lovely down was covered in mud, and she believed she would never escape this cage. It was her

new home. Through the bars of the cage, she saw dozen upon dozens of birds drifting through

the breeze being guided by the wind. Their voices each matched in perfect harmony as they sang

one after another. The bird's sorrow shrunk as rage boiled up beneath her skin. Jealousy of the

other free- flying birds seeped from her feathers, coating her down with yet anoth...

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...bird could do

was pay respect to the one soul had helped her realize the power of love and the strength within

herself. Again she lifted her and the other bird up into the air and hoisted him through the sky.

She flew over mountains and forest alike until she reached the sea. By this time the sun was

setting, which lit up the rolling waves with the most astonishing hues. The bird halted when she

reached the deepest point in the sea and as gently asshe could she unwrapped her claws and let

go of the white speckled bird. She watched as his body drifted back and forth until he was no

longer visible. He would forever remain under the sweeping waves only as a faint memory, one

moment in a world of infinities. The bird never again returned to the forest or saw another golden

cage. She spent the rest of her days dancing with the wind and singing sweet songs.

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