Comparison Of Brush Fire And The Santa Ana Winds

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The forces of nature not only shape the world around us, they also wriggle into our minds. In their essays, Brush Fire and The Santa Ana Winds, Didion and Thomas describe the indomitable power of the Santa Ana phenomenon, a time when warm dry winds breathe flame into the hills surrounding the city of angels. Much like certain chaparral of the southern California Hills the texts spring from the same root - both texts speak to the immeasurable and awesome power of this meteorological event, sharing similarities in vivid diction and, at times, imagery. In spite of these surface level parallels, however, these two texts branch off away from each other when it comes to the purpose, tone, syntax - both authors have vastly different messages to …show more content…

The plainest way one see how they diverge is in how each author approaches the destruction that the Santa Ana brings to Los Angeles when its winds begin to blow in early December. Thomas’ tone starts didactic, and informative, her writing’s syntax more mechanical than the opposing text. Thomas is describing the nuanced details of the storm itself, and the hills it dominates. She describes the “padre's staff”, a grass that “requires the heat of a flame to crack open their seed pods and prepare for germination”, the intermittent nature of chaparral foliage that “ranges from ground-level wildflowers that require a magnifying glass, to eight-foot scrub oak and sage bushes.” The reader is focused on these smaller details, and Thomas uses this strategy to pull the reader in, drag them through place where “ fire that can rush up a canyon like a locomotive, roaring and exploding brush as it rages”. She lets the reader see it all, what everything she’s just told them actually means when conglomerated. Didion, on the other hand, is not focusing on the natural setting of the Santa Ana, although the fire looms large in her text as well, but the human setting. Her tone is thus more emotionally based, more feeling flows through it, there is a dynamism to her voice. Instead of focusing on describing the hills, Didion writes about the emotion that flows through the city, the maid sulking, the baby fretting. As the texts goes on the collective anger builds, and does the sentence length and complexity. Didion uses her syntax to slowly focus in on situations of pent-up rage that are allowed a channel of release during the strange desert season that takes hold, speaking of a time when every booze party ends in a fight, husbands roam their homes with machetes, and prominent attorneys commit

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