Changes in Tone Throughout the Glass Castle by Jeannette Walls

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Throughout the Glass Castle there is a constant shift in Jeanettes tone through her use of diction. Her memoir is centered around her memories with her family, but mainly her father Rex Walls. Although it is obvious through the eyes of the reader that Rex is an unfit parent and takes no responsibility for his children, in her childhood years Jeanette continually portrays Rex as an intelligent and loving father, describing her younger memories with admiration in her tone. The capitalization of “Dad” reflects Jeannette’s overall admiration for her father and his exemplary valor. “Dad always fought harder, flew faster, and gambled smarter than everyone else in his stories”(Walls 24). Jeanette also uses simple diction to describe her father, by starting sentences with, “Dad said,” over and over. By choosing to use basic language instead of stronger verbs, she captures her experience in a pure and honest tone. However as Jeanette and her siblings quickly lose their innocence and are pulled into the reality of life, her idolization of her parents, (especially her father) gradually lessens and she comes to terms with their flawed lifestyle. As she begins to lose hope in her parents, she begins describing them in a more negative light. For example, she exposes the intensification of her father's drinking problem. “He staggered off to the bathroom, came back, ordered one for the road, slammed the shot glass down on the bar, and walked to the door. He lost his footing trying to open it and sprawled on the floor. I tried to help him up, but he kept falling over”(page?) This repugnant and embarrassing description of Rex, contrasts how Jeanette tried to showcase his admirable qualities earlier in the story. In the sentence she also no longe... ... middle of paper ... ...has the connotations of difficulty and adversity. In these lines, Jeanette realizes the emptiness of Welch and struggles that will continue to drown her if she stays. Wall’s also writes using informal diction and simple sentence structure, to make her story more personable and relatable. By using this simple and casual style of writing, the reader is able to draw a connection to her experiences. “Since she never used curse words, she was calling Dad names like ‘blankety-blank’ and worthless drunk so-and-so.” This sentence exemplifies Wall’s casual and personable voice. By telling her story in a straightforward way she is able to convey her challenging life to the reader effortlessly. It is also interesting to see her writing develop and progress, and she matures as a character. She does this by expanding her vocabulary and knowledge on certain things, (alcoholism).

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