Atmosphere and Tension in The Red Room, The Signalman, and The Inexperienced Ghost

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Discuss the ways in which The Red Room, The Signalman and The

Inexperienced Ghost create and sustain atmosphere and tension.

It is clear that atmosphere and tension are of fundamental importance

to the success and effectiveness of a ghostly tale. As Susan Hill, a

prolific writer of ghostly tales, says ‘one thing a ghost story must

have is atmosphere’. Also it is clear that ‘The Red Room’, ‘The

Signallman’ and ‘The Inexperienced Ghost’ create tension and

atmosphere at varying degrees.

The role of the narrator is of fundamental importance when creating

atmosphere and tension in the ghostly genre. In ‘The Red Room’, the

narrator goes to a castle to investigate a haunting. The reader

throughout the story is restricted from knowing of the history of the

narrator and reasons questions such as ‘Why is he there?’. For

example, in ‘The Red Room’, the narrator says, ‘“It is what I came

for”’, he does not ellaborate on this at all. Similiarly the narrator

of ‘The Signalman’ is vague about why he is there, he seems to just

want a chat with this lonely man. In both stories both narrators are

extremely curious, this curiosity can help to explain the strange

reasons of them being there, although it would not seem to be a

satisfactory reason. The vagueness and curiosity of these narrators

adds uncertainty to the readers mind and so aiding the atmosphere,

though not necesarilly creating it. Also having a narrator helps to

increase a story’s credibility and it also adds emotion. In ‘The Red

Room’ the narrator describes his time in the red room and how he tried

to reasure himself that there are no such things as ghosts, even when

faced with clear evidence of it. He helps the tension to climax by his

increased desperation, ‘I was now almost frantic with the horror of

the coming darkness, and my self-possesion deserted me’. His attempts

at being logical had failed and this helped the tension more than if

he had believed in ghosts all the way through. In ‘The Inexperienced

Ghost’ it would appear that at the start the role of the narrator is

to detract tension from the story. However, towards the end it is this

casual friendliness that helps to increase tension and atmosphere, ‘I,

at least, with a sort of tight, stiff feeling about me…’. There is a

much greater change in atmosphere and tension than in ‘The Red Room’

and ‘The Signalman’, which both start off extremely dreary. It is

clear that in all these stories the narrator is put to great effect in

creating atmosphere and tension through their very pronounced human

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