Analysis Of There's No Justice In The War On Drugs

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Growing up in the United States means going through some type of anti-drug program.
Kids start being introduced to drugs at a very young age because the first interaction with them is being told not to do any of them. Most kids have no idea what drugs are until this program is introduced in elementary schools telling kids not to do drugs. In “There’s No Justice in the War on Drugs”, Milton Friedman talks about the injustice of drugs and the harsh reality of being addicted to drugs, and the causes or side effects that come along with them. The author clearly argues the “war on drugs” and uses analysis and data to prove his argument. The author agrees that the use of government to keep kids away from drugs should be enforced, but the use of government to keep adults away from drugs, should not be enforced. The author has a clear side of his argument and the audience can clearly see that. He argues against the “war on drugs” claim that President Richard M. Nixon made twenty-five years ago, he adds ethos, logos, and pathos to defend his argument, and uses a toulmin …show more content…

Friedman does however include a fallacy, “Though most customers do not live on the inner cities, most sellers do” (569). After adding this sentence in his paragraph, he does not further explain this or adds how he knows this information. His least effective element of this essay is his lack of examples and sentences. The author kept it short and simple when writing this essay. Except, his position is intense which is why he should’ve included at least some more examples. Some of his main points on why he disagrees with government enforcement on drugs, have five or less sentences. This is very little for his position. He should’ve added a few more sentences and examples to further strengthen his

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