Analysis Of The First Day By Edward P. Jones

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The first day of school can be exciting and adventurous for many people, but for others it may be problematic. In “The First Day” by Edward P. Jones, the girl is having her first day of school by signing up. Her mother tries to sign up at Seaton Elementary School, nonetheless she was not accepted because she was from another district. Jones argues that although this may be an unremarkable first day of school for the girl, it allowed the girl to understand the struggles of placing her in a school because of her mother’s limitations in education. Edward P. Jones employs rhetorical techniques to convey his meaning and to appeal to the readers emotions. In the short story, Jones describes how the mother helps her get ready for school. The mother “uncharacteristically spent nearly an hour” on her hair. Jones also continues by visualizing what the girl ate. Her stomach was full of “milk and oatmeal sweetened with brown sugar” it gave the sense that she was satisfied with her breakfast …show more content…

Through his many visualizations, he has brought precise descriptive writing in his short story to allow us to analyze his thoughts in this little girl’s mind about her mother. The story is written to conceptualize the struggles of an illiterate mother and a “father who has been long gone” who helps her daughter to sign up for school. Jones’ word choice is considerate in that it is effective in showing the little girl’s thoughts. Through his word choice and diction that the mother cannot read or write, it conveys the message that the daughter is the first generation to go to school. This is proven because the mother could not even fill out the form to sign her daughter up for school. If she knew even a little bit of vocabulary, she would have been able to easily fill out the form. Therefore, the daughter is the first person to ever go to school and the mother would not give that up just because one school did not accept

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