Analysis Of The Busy Trap

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Authors create logical fallacies all the time without readers knowing it. Tim Kreider's 'The Busy Trap,' is an example that has a few of these fallacies. Kreider shares his opinions regarding how everyone in this world is totally obsessed with unnecessary and ominous tasks. In his article, Kreider’s paints a picture of what society views as 'busy' and even talks about the negative impact it can have on someone’s mental health and well being. Kreider states that in order for people to feel accomplished and productive, they think they must have something going on every hour of the day and week, including weekend. Kreider not only targets adults who have fallen victim to the increase in the busy lifestyle but children as well who have taken …show more content…

Kreider has made some bold conclusions or outcomes with little evidence to support other than his opinion. I think he is stereotyping groups of people and sharing his opinion of their definition of busy and others who read this article may feel the same way. A example of him committing this fallacy is when he he says “Even children are busy now, scheduled down to the half-hour with classes and extra-curricular activities. They come home at the end of the day as tired as grown ups” (Krieder, 983). This commits the hasty generalization fallacy because thats his point of view and only his. Also, what he said about the children being busy all the time makes me wonder where is he getting that information from and why doesn’t he provide any outside information supporting what he said. An opportunity could be to change some of the words on his opinion to ensure that it is allowing others to think about this population who think they are too busy and allow the reader to think about his own life to determine if they are victim to this scenario. I don’t think it allows others to think about it when it reads as if Kreider is an experts and what he is saying is the

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