Analysis Of Michelle Kleniert's Essay 'One Punch Can Kill'

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The issue surrounding one punch laws has been arisen in the news recently, and has therefore sparked many to contemplate the laws put in place by the Victorian government surrounding this issue. Michelle Kleinert’s opinion piece for a petition justifies the reason as to why the laws should be changed in both an antagonistic and reasonable but firm tone. The headline ‘Stop. One Punch Can Kill’ is supported with a logo, the headline and logo are intended to draw the reader in and reinforce the idea. Kleinert’s contention is to change the laws surrounding one punch deaths, she supports her argument with evidence of failed convictions, a statement affirming that we can no longer watch our loved ones being killed or sustain horrendous long-term …show more content…

Kleniert uses strong language and appeals to the fear of her audience using examples of ‘ridiculously low minimum sentences’. She uses four examples all of which killed individuals with one punch and received extremely short sentences. These examples support Kleniert’s argument and explicates how the system is failing, they appeal to the audience and reinforces Kleniert’s idea that the law must change.

Kleninert continues to build her case that the laws surrounding one-punch assaults through techniques of appealing to the emotion of her audience. Kleninert uses statements that emotionally affect her audience by using inclusive language ‘we can no longer watch our loved ones being killed’ this statement appeals to the audience by including them in the argument and making them feel as though this particular issue affects them on a more personal …show more content…

The main focus of the photograph is the fist, as it is the only element the that is not blurred, this is intended to reinforce the main contention of the author as the photograph has been designed to encourage the audience to focus on the fist. Kleinert chose to use this particular photograph in her option piece as it is intended to shock the audience, it supply’s the audience with the deception of what being the victim of a ‘one punch’ would look

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