Analysis Of Brent Staples 'Why Colleges Shower Their Students With A's'

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Brent Staples, “Why Colleges Shower Their Students With A’s” In his essay, "Why Colleges Shower Their Students With A’s,” Staples claims that student grades are increasing for the wrong reasons, causing college degrees to become meaningless. Staples provides evidence that average grades have increased significantly over the last several decades, but claims that it is not because students are working harder. The real explanation for grade inflation, he argues, is the effect of grades on both students and their professors. Teachers give more A’s to receive better evaluations and increase job security. Students give more importance to their grades as a result of the rapidly increasing cost of a college education. Staples argues that modern …show more content…

Presence, Gladwell argues, occurs when a person’s body language matches up with his or her speech. Millan’s presence, for example, means that dogs will do what he wants them to without the need for direct commands. Gladwell states that the same concept applies to people. He describes Millan’s struggle to treat his wife with affection—Millan has to compare her to a dog to realize that she has her own needs and emotions. Later in the essay, Gladwell interviews Suzi Tortora, a dance-movement psychotherapist. Tortora uses her presence with Eric, an autistic child who has issues communicating. She mimics his body language with slight alterations in order to stop his tantrum. Gladwell ends the essay with a summarizing story—Milan is angry with a family whose actions conflict with their …show more content…

He adopts a somewhat casual tone and avoids pretension in order to convince out-of-touch adults that it should be replaced. Botstein begins his essay by listing examples to assert that the American high school is obsolete. He describes high school as if to someone who knows nothing about it, so as to better expose the failings of the institution. Current or former high-schoolers remember the team sport culture, but might not realize its harm without Botstein’s detached and somewhat analytical description. In the third paragraph, he switches from long, descriptive sentences, to short, straightforward ones. The juxtaposition catches the reader’s attention as Botstein ends his introduction and makes a new point. He switches from an analytical tone to a poignant, provocative one, juxtaposing the culture of high school with that of the adult world. By straightforwardly stating the differences, Botstein completes the exposition of high school’s

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