Miriam Waddington Revision In The Odyssey

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After centuries of serving as background noise to her husband Ulysses’ odes of sea storms, sirens, and celebrity, the mythological Penelope finally steps into the light in Miriam Waddington’s poem “Ulysses Embroidered.” Functioning as a revisionary text to both the Alfred, Lord Tennyson work “Ulysses” and the tradition of The Odyssey itself, “Ulysses Embroidered” quickly strikes its readers as a fiercely feminist re-envisioning of Penelope and her tale. Waddington’s work allows for an age-old legend to be told in a new way with a bold, feminine speaker, but to what end do her changes remark on Tennyson’s original work? By engaging in two separate modes of revision by both reading against the grain and “constantly [engaging] in dialogue” to …show more content…

Waddington grabs hold of this notion and retrieves the trope of the “old blind woman in the tower” by giving her new life with the restructuring of the poem (Waddington 4-5). While Tennyson’s epic poem utilizes the strict confines of iambic pentameter and heroic verse known by Homer’s original Odyssey, Penelope’s updated narrative bleeds out through a variant, but equally structured schematic. Waddington’s six stanzas contain a slow moving enjambment of choppier and more laborious lines, creating a certain rocking of language emergent from the first lines: “You’ve come / at last from / all your journeying” (Waddington 1-3). This motion of the poem effuses the tediousness of Penelope’s long wait, as well the feeling of the line by line repetition of the legendary loom through which her story (and her husband’s) is woven. While Tennyson’s work conforms to that of typical myth and masculine heroics, the base structure of the revision places the role of storyteller in Penelope’s …show more content…

These intentional references to Penelope’s blindness, a traditionally diminishing character trait, thus call us to read more deeply in order to understand the importance of the recurring motif. By digging into this construction within Penelope, we suddenly begin to see her not only as a tool for modern feminism in the retelling of stories, but also as a powerful lens through which to re-envision the original work and to view the dialogue between the pretext and the revision. The necessary examination of blindness in “Ulysses Embroidered” compels the audience to seek the theme out in different manners in the pretext, this time looking more pointedly at blindness on the side of Ulysses as we turn from discussion of an old blind woman to a man “made weak by time and fate” (Tennyson 69). Together, Waddington and Tennyson’s words underline Ulysses’ own blindness: myopia and ignorance toward his reality, whether it be to his fate or his family. As is most evident in the Tennyson work, Ulysses is so incredibly war driven that instead of enjoying the life that his battles have struggled for, he regards even death as a battle to be fought, looking to voyage into the terrain of Hades “to strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield” (Tennyson 70). The hero is similarly myopic towards his son, who

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