An Analysis Of How To Transform An Everyday, Ordinary Hoop Court

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Everyone wants to get better at something, but some want it more than others. In “How to Transform an Everyday, Ordinary Hoop Court into a Place of Higher Learning and You at the Podium”, the narrator wants to get better at basketball, so he wakes up everyday at 4:30 to go with his dad to his work. Everyday, the narrator would wait 3 hours in his dad’s car until the gym opened, only to sit on the bench and watch the other men play basketball. Finally, one of the best players, Dante, tells the narrator he can play but he’ll get “smoked”. However, the narrator proved him wrong. The narrator learns that if you persevere, work hard, and have confidence, your dreams may come true. In How to Transform an Everyday, Ordinary Hoop Court into a Place …show more content…

After Dante demands the narrator to leave, and then calls him a scrub, the narrator is confused and wonders if Dante is right. “You’re confused almost to the point of paralysis. Because what did you do wrong? Why does he hate you? Your heart thump-thump-thumping inside of your chest. Doubt setting in. Maybe he's right. Maybe you really are a scrub. Maybe you shouldn't be allowed to show up like this everyday, uninvited” (de la Peña). The narrator’s thoughts contribute to the character’s motivation because at this moment it seems like the narrator is thinking of giving up. However, the narrator doesn’t give up which shows he is persevering and has confidence in himself. With these thoughts we can infer that the character builds up motivation to prove Dante wrong about all the things he …show more content…

‘What?’ ‘I wanna play!’” (de la Peña). Since the narrator was mumbling at first, we can infer that the narrator was uncertain if he should stay and speak up to Dante. After Dante shouts back at him, the narrator gains more confidence and repeats with a stronger tone. The narrator is more motivated than he was before because he stands up to Dante using a louder voice, instead of just mumbling. If de la Peña did not use descriptive words, there wouldn’t be any tone and the story would be bland with no emotion. Finally, Matt de la Peña shows the character’s motivation through dialogue. One day Dante finally confronts the narrator. “‘Hey kid, why are you still coming here?’ You pause your dribble, stunned. ‘Who me? ‘Nobody thinks you're good enough to play here, comprende? Why don't you go on back to the barrio, esé.’ Your whole body will freeze up from the shock of his words. Everyone in the entire gym inching closer, waiting to see what happens next. Dante strides over and points a finger in your face. ‘What are you deaf, kid? I said leave!’” (de la Peña). This leads to the narrator wanting to prove Dante wrong. The narrator wants to show Dante that he is good enough to play at the gym. The narrator has a stronger motivation to prove Dante wrong than before because now Dante has verbally expressed that he dislikes the narrator and that the narrator should leave. Before, the other men would not let the narrator play,

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