An Alternate Ending Of A Hero's Journey

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Bahauddin walked up the chimney like path and started climbing up. Bahauddin’s vision went blurry and he leaned against the path wall for support and his breathe turned faint, and he remembered when he got the 7 keys. His memory was interrupted by noises behind him, footsteps? Maybe rats? Bahauddin looked behind him quickly and did a 360 turn to make sure no one is down there with him. He mumbled in Arabic, “yjb 'an yakun eumri musajilaan maeia..” (It must be my old age messing with me..) He continued down and and stopped to look at some symbols on the wall. Bahauddin took a breath and looked at all the symbols. One of the invaders named Zim came in the path and saw Bahauddin and he chuckled evilly and grabbed the 7 keys from his belt. Zim …show more content…

Bahauddin ran from the salt caverns all the way to Balabad as soon as he saw his keys were gone despite the fact that he was old and actually very weak, and as soon as the invader handed Zim the baby girl Bahauddin came smashed the doors and started punching all the invaders “DON’T TOUCH MY DAUGHTER YOU HALOGENS!” Bahauddin yelled and Zim looked down at the baby, “Hello Lilac..” Zim smiled evilly “Kill him and his putrid wife for stealing my beloved daughter.” Zim commanded and the invaders rushed into the Queen's bedroom and stabbed Bahauddins wife to death. As Bahauddin was fighting the invaders he heard his wife's screams of terror, she screamed bloody murder. It made Bahauddins heart skip a beat as he saw and heard the woman he loved so dearly being stabbed to death. The invaders ran at Bahauddin and he gained some sort of strength and started fighting back even though he was so weak and frail. Bahauddin fought and fought for what seemed forever till finally Zim was only invader left and Bahauddin panted as wiped the sweat from his forehead. He took a knife from one of the invaders and stabbed Zim in the

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