Obama's Keynote: Uniting America in 2004

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Who knew in 2004 that we would have our first black president? In the Democratic National Convention, senator Barack Obama spoke for the presidential candidate, John Kerry. As the keynote speaker for the Democratic party, he emphasized the principles of his party and unity of American people . With his audience members being democrats, republicans, liberals, and conservatives, he knows that they have their differences, but in the end, they pledge their loyalties to the same country; Obama effectively captures the mind of his audience in a well-orchestrated speech, his character and spirit spoke volumes about him as an individual, and his expert storytelling made the audience members think. In his speech, Obama sets the stage …show more content…

One such story was about a young marine he met on his trip to Illinois. The anecdote had enough detail to create a mental picture to get his point across. He did not want to give too much detail on that story because if he did then the picture that the audience was drawn in their heads would be ruined and their opinions on the marine would change. Obama expertly weaved his story into a rhetorical question that would make the audience vulnerable. He questioned, “Are we serving Shamus as well as he is serving us?” (Obama). The question turned heads and his audience members listened with awe, he had convinced them into believing every little word by one short story. He also entices fear within his audience’s heart by talking about the safety of the nation and the safety of children. The two things that the …show more content…

That’s what exactly happened to Barack Obama, but would we want him dressed in his pajamas, giving a speech? It would make him look lousy and make the pubic dis-interested. If they are wearing suits and have great posture, the charisma would flow through the room like fresh ocean breeze. The listeners did not know who Barack Obama was before this speech but with his introduction story about his family and the hardships they had faced. The members could piece together that he came from a hard-working family and it made him credible. Additionally, he spoke with clear and strong voice that compelled the audience by his charm. His character was outlined when he talked about the people he met during his journey and what he wants to do to help them and

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